A few Sundays back we went to the Art Show in Wellington and I bought a picture. A small black and white print by Joe Wright of a figure standing on this very precarious base of branches like a kereru nest, holding a megaphone up to the sky, and out of the megaphone comes all these birds. I love it.
I love it because it says where I am with my writing, and coming to terms with being a Māori writer, standing on this very shaky base and trying to make a stance.
Later that day we were lucky enough to catch Donna Dean at Lembas Café in Raumati South. She is such an open and honest person, a very genuine singer songwriter musician. Her songs are straight forward and she just tells it like it is. It was an inspiring day.
I was very much reminded of my mentor’s – Reina Whaitiri – words. “The language should disappear for the reader… we forget we are reading. If you use language that insists on being noticed the story gets lost.” My recent experience with art and song writing are very apt examples, ie. KISS.
So, my own writing. I think how I am affected by art, songs, music, stories, and it’s the openness of the writer, artist that fades behind the work that captures me. Reina has given me a list of books and authors to read as points of reference. She has also suggested changing tense, using the present. Try it, she says, see what you think. So I have, and in some cases it works, other times I get confused. It’s hard to give up the preciousness of your work, but it’s a good lesson. Reina said she can be tough, she is, but she is also absolutely right.
The last few weeks have been about learning to let go, trying to rid the author from the writing, and let the narrator get on with the story.